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Posted by jngan22 | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on January 11, 2022
Hi i’m Joseph i’m in year 6 and i like art, xbox, my dog and my pc I don’t really know what to write um. My dog [Bailey] who is a black lab and is not even a year old he uses cardboard like chewing gum and i don’t know why. Bailey also enjoys dog walks and sleeping.
In Singapore your simile wouldn’t make any sense because gum is against the law. We don’t have many dogs either because people have small apartments. I hope you take him on lots of walks.
+I like how you mentioned your dog.
?Why did you decide to say”I don’t really know what to say but um”?
->You could add more detail about yourself
+ I like how you mentioned your dog eating cardboard.
? Is that safe for him?
-> Use a capital letter for I.